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Jason Edward is a District Manager of the Metropolitan Water District. He has been working at the Metropolitan Water District for over 5 years. He is an easy-going, nice, quite middle age man. Even though, Edward does not have an advance degree from elite schools, many officers and staffs at the Metropolitan Water District like him and his personalities. He is current trying to finish his project with City of Riverport. He wants to get $30,000 from City of Riverport. Outside of his career, he has a son, Shawn Edward, a 21 years old man whose dream is to follow footstep of father. Shawn Edward is aggressive, stubborn, and trouble makers. He was arrested from Driving Under the Influence (DUI) 2 years ago. He is currently enrolling in the state college and majoring in Political Science. Shawn has a top-secret that he has been hidden from his father for over a year. He is secretly involved with Heather, the daughter of the City Manager of Riverport. Marsha Brady is a District Counsel of the Metropolitan Water District. She started the office of the District Counsel since the Former District Counsel took early retirement. She was only 43 years old when she held the position. She is a very ambitious, smart, motivated, hard-working, and educated woman. She is very knowledgably in the subject and the area. She is a type A personality and wants to settle this case quickly without appear to be “too aggressive”. Steven Boswell is the City Manager of Riverport. He is highly educated, well-respected, and well-liked upper class man. He is a great manager and know in-and-out of the Riverport because he has been working for the Riverport since he graduated from Yale University. Boswell is 51 years old. He married to Amanda Boswell. They have only one daughter, Heather. Heather is a daddy’s little girl. Mr Boswell wants Heather to marry a rich and educated man; therefore he wants Heather and Shawn to end their romantic relationship. Jacqueline Thomas is 45 years old. She is a well-respected and well known as a tough litigator. She is very ambitious, aggressive, and educated. She wants to continue her good reputation by quickly ending the case.

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1. Jason Edward is a District Manager of the Metropolitan Water District. He has been working at the Metropolitan Water District for over 5 years. He is an easy-going, nice, quite middle-aged man. Even though Edward does not have an advance degree from an elite school, many officers and staff members at the Metropolitan Water District like him and his personality. He is currently trying to finish his project with theCity of Riverport. He wants to get $30,000 from the City of Riverport. Outside of his career, he has a son, Shawn Edward, a 21-year-old man whose dream is to follow in the footsteps of his father. Shawn Edward is aggressive, stubborn, and a trouble maker. He was arrested for driving under the influence (DUI) 2 years ago. He is currently enrolled in the state college and majoring in Political Science. Shawn has a big secret that he has been hiding from his father for over a year. He is secretly involved with Heather, the daughter of the City Manager of Riverport. Marsha Brady is a District Counsel of the Metropolitan Water District. She has held the office of the District Counsel since the Former District Counsel took early retirement. She was only 43 years old when she got the position. She is a very ambitious, smart, motivated, hard-working, and educated woman. She is very knowledgable in the subject and the area. She is a type A personality and wants to settle this case quickly without appearing to be too aggressive. Steven Boswell is the City Manager of Riverport. He is a highly educated, well-respected, and well-liked upper-class man. He is a great manager and knows all the ins and outs of the City of Riverport because he has been working for the City since he graduated from Yale University. Boswell is 51 years old. He is married to Amanda Boswell. They have only one daughter, Heather. Heather is a daddy’s little girl. Mr. Boswell wants Heather to marry a rich and educated man; therefore he wants Heather and Shawn to end their romantic relationship. Jacqueline Thomas is 45 years old. She is well-respected and is well-known as a tough litigator. She is very ambitious, aggressive, and educated. She wants to continue her good reputation by quickly ending the case.
2. HOPE, I REALLY HOPE YOU GROW UP AND TAKE ON YOUR OWN RESONSIBILITYS, IT IS OKAY TO ASK FOR HELP BUT YOU ASK FOR IT WAY TO MUCH. WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU NEED HELP AND NO ONE IS THERE TO HELP?